The worst thing about my book, Shattering Glass by Gail Giles, is that it is hard to follow at times. Occasionally, the narrator will jump around to things that have not been mentioned in awhile or at all in the book. Speaking of the narrator, who is it? I am unable to decipher who is telling the story. This can take a huge toll on the reader's feeling and emotion towards the book. If the person reading the book doesn't know who is talking, it is then extremely hard to follow the piece.
The best thing about this book is the whole plot or concept. The overall meaning of the story relates to so many people because most of the population goes through high school at one point in their life. Not only going to high school but that almost every high school has kids that get picked on. However, it is not often that jocks would help out a kid that isn't as popular as them. This is truly an extraordinary plot that people need to read about.
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